The Complete TOEFL Writing Autopsy
Both volumes in one bundle — save $10. 12 real TOEFL Writing responses dissected line by line across Email and Academic Discussion tasks. Every error color-coded, diagnosed against the ETS rubric, and corrected. The complete system to understand why your score isn't improving.
You’re practicing TOEFL Writing. Your score won’t move. You don’t know what you’re doing wrong — and neither do the YouTube templates you memorized.
The Complete TOEFL Writing Autopsy gives you both volumes in one package — covering the two TOEFL Writing tasks that require full written responses:
Volume 1: Email Autopsies
6 real Write an Email responses dissected at score levels 2, 3, and 5. You’ll see exactly how register mistakes, vague vocabulary, and template filler cost students points — and how the same prompt produces a completely different result when approached strategically.
Volume 2: Academic Discussion Autopsies
6 real Write for an Academic Discussion responses dissected at the same score levels. You’ll see why naming a student isn’t the same as engaging with their argument, why dismissing a counterpoint kills your Development score, and why a response with zero grammar errors can still score a 3.
What’s inside both volumes:
— 12 full autopsies across 4 prompts, each with 3 score levels
— Color-coded error marking system (grammar, vocabulary, task)
— Error-by-error diagnosis linked to official ETS rubric criteria
— Corrected responses with detailed margin annotations
— 6 scoring myths debunked (3 per volume — including why YouTube templates trigger the e-rater)
— The ETS Scoring System explained in plain English
— Annex: 8 Common Errors Spanish Speakers Make and the Spanish grammar patterns that cause them
Why the bundle?
Bought separately, both volumes cost $39.98. The bundle saves you $10 — and gives you the complete picture across both Writing tasks. The same error patterns show up in emails and discussions, but each task has its own traps. You need to see both.
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6 real TOEFL Academic Discussion responses dissected line by line. See exactly why each response scores a 2, 3, or 5 — with every error color-coded, diagnosed against the official ETS rubric, and corrected with margin notes. Includes 3 myths specific to Academic Discussion and 8 common errors Spanish speakers make.
The TOEFL Writing Autopsy: Email Autopsies
6 real TOEFL Writing email responses dissected line by line. See exactly why each response scores a 2, 3, or 5 — with every error color-coded, diagnosed against the official ETS rubric, and corrected with detailed margin notes. Includes a guide to the 3 myths killing your score and 8 common errors Spanish speakers make.